Saturday, July 17, 2010

Smile That Made My Day

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

 A smile that made my day. There she was on the footpath and me inside the car. She induced that smile in me

 There was a glass between us but her careless smile touched me deep inside. There she was enjoying her first sale of the day. May be i'm richer in life than her but she made me feel poor in that moment. I envy you hawker girl.

P.S - This is my first attempt that 55 Fiction. I know it's not good. Would be glad to hear some feedbacks.
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